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18 October 2008 @ 10:40 am
Moaning - Drabble featuring Sanzo, Goku, & Hakkai  
This drabble is inspired by one of [info]sasunarufan02's suggested prompt. I hope you enjoy it.

Author: [info]feait
Title: Moaning
Characters: Sanzo, Goku, & Hakkai


Setting: The Sanzo Ikkou pulls into a little town because they need to resupply and take care of the monkey.



Moaning

Goku just didn’t know how to be discreet; everyone in the inn could hear his moaning. He couldn’t help it; he was in pain.

Sanzo had Goku pinned to the bed to minimize the monkey’s writhing beneath him. “Stop struggling. You’re only making this worse,” he warned.

Goku’s eyes were filled with tears. “Sanzo, it hurts so bad.”

“Goku, if you’d just cooperate, this will all be over soon,” Hakkai said soothingly. “Now, open wide.”

The monkey refused to open his mouth.

Sanzo pressed harder, in hopes that would cause Goku to open his mouth. It didn’t work; it only caused Goku to moan louder.

Hakkai pinched Goku’s nose closed.

A few seconds later, Goku’s mouth opened. He gagged on what Hakkai stuck in as tears flowed down his checks.

“Just swallow it, you dumb chimp!” Sanzo snarled.

Goku did as he was told. “It tastes horrible. Why did you make me eat that?”

Sanzo released Goku and walked away from the bed.

Hakkai dried Goku’s tears.

“Because you ate the food we threw out. Hakkai told you it was spoiled, but you had to it anyway,” said Sanzo. “You deserve that stomachache, you idiot.” He lit a cigarette.

“Maybe, Sanzo,” Hakkai replied, “but no one in the inn would get any sleep if we let him moan all night.”

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What were you thinking? The suggested prompt from [info]sasunarufan02 was spoiled food.


 
 
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( 6 comments — Post a new comment )
orvida[info]orvida on October 18th, 2008 05:31 pm (UTC)
I must say i was caught off gaurd with that one.
Who knew.

Goku could get an upset stomache ache at the rate he he eats its amazing to think his body would rebel at anything other than the pain of being beaten or shot at.
Sho: Saiyuki - naughty bishies[info]feait on October 18th, 2008 07:00 pm (UTC)
what caught you off-guard: Goku's bellyache or how his cure was set up?

I enjoyed writing this drabble because it leads you one way, but it's goes in a completely different direction.
sasunarufan02[info]sasunarufan02 on October 19th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
That. Was. Love. thank you soo much, I loved it, poor goku taking medicine can be such a pain.
Sho: Grumpy Sanzo and Happy Goku by edyna[info]feait on October 19th, 2008 02:52 pm (UTC)
i'm glad this was a big hit with you. ^_^

the moment i thought of Goku with a bellyache because he ate spoiled food i imagined all the trouble Hakkai would have giving that monkey medicine and had to share what my imagination came up with.
Saru: SHOTA ABUSE[info]sarubaby on October 29th, 2008 10:14 am (UTC)
baahahahaha holy shit, I love it~
Sho: happy goku and gojyo by edyna[info]feait on October 29th, 2008 11:32 am (UTC)
glad it made you laugh. that's what i was going for.